0:00 Nice. Very bombastic and riff-filled. Has an epic feel about it.
0:23 Not sure I agree with the percussion here, but oh well.
0:40 Here's a nice part here. I like the rising chords and the overall feel of symphony. It just feels a tad forced, though.
1:03 These riffs are very nice. They provide good contrast. However, those drums are annoying me, they don't suit the track.
1:28 Ah very nice interlude! I love it. Your riffs are excellent and well placed. This part isn't as busy as the rest of it, and kind of has a happy-go-lucky Pokemon feel to it. Kind of like the Japanese animation scores, or something.
2:04 Nice chords through here.
2:19 TEH EPIC RIFFS
2:28 You're right, the percussion does bring something though, but I'm not sure it's that beat. The Kick-hat-snare-hat trick isn't working for me. Maybe something more unique or suiting?
2:57 OK the riffs are getting overdone here. They are nice, but now it feels like general wankery :P
3:15 Ooh nice chords coming through here.
3:33 Nice changing up.
3:40 Sweet point, right here. The quick chord changes are beautiful.
3:49 Happy-go-lucky again. That's another sweet spot. This melody is achingly beautiful.
4:16 sweet chords to end off with. will it calm down enough before the end?
4:33 Kinda abrupt, but nice.
This song is very cotton-candy sweet, featuring plentiful riffs, and melodic play. Sometimes the riffs can be overdone, but overall it's a sweet touch. The chords here meld with each other quite nicely, especially when you go into the happy-go-lucky portion near the middle, and the end. Sounds like the theme for some Japanese anime show or something (in a good way). The drums didn't hit it for me (no pun intended). But overall very sweet composition with varying themes and motifs that keep the listener interested. Good job.