0:00 Starts off with a simple melody by the synth.
0:20 The bass is coming in. The bass kind of reminds me of an 80's neon-soaked cop drama.
0:35 I like this breakdown. Pulls things back a bit.
0:50 The glitches kind of put me off. Feels a bit weird at the end of every second beat.
1:10 OK now it feels a bit too much like layering instruments on for the sake of it, too many melodies going on at once that don't serve to compliment each other. I do this too, though.
1:40 That main melody is getting a bit repetitious.
1:55 Still a groovy song, probably virtue of those stabbing chords. But the way things repeat isn't that nice.
2:05 That snare is mixed pretty well.
2:15 Ooh this is a nice change. But I still think that the rhythm of the main synth should change, and there should be a chord progression that goes for longer than 2 bars.
2:40 Yeah, the short nature of the chord progression makes things a bit repetitive and not in a good way.
2:53 Still pretty groovy though. I can hear little cowbells I think.
3:05 This is a nice ending, you bring in a few little synths that I would have liked to see rear their head earlier, if not for being absolutely obscured by the bullying main melody.
This thing could actually be benefited from a bit of stripping back, and adding only elements that you need to add. Sometimes it's just too many layers. But overall, the groove and the consistency of your sounds makes this an enjoyable listen anyway. Pretty well-mixed for the most part. Just needs a little work. Also the chord progressions are probably too short, I would have liked to see longer ones with a better resolution and overall journey.
Cheers!