This is really moody and I like the piano VST you used. I like the melody. Cool stuff, man, cool beans :)
This is really moody and I like the piano VST you used. I like the melody. Cool stuff, man, cool beans :)
0:00 OK we're starting off with some nice chords, uplifting.
0:13 I can hear strings behind it. It's uplifting
0:25 I think the orchestral build up is a bit cheesy
0:34 That riff on top that repeats is quite good for building up, the filter automation that I think I'm hearing is pretty good for building up.
0:55 I feel like this is a soft build up, i hope the payoff is good
1:04 I think the payoff could have been more climactic here, the main synth feels a bit cheap like it was put through a simple Gross Beat pattern, but it's not exceptionally bad
1:37 Pretty great mixing here. I like the composition of the track, it feels professional
1:48 Oh. That's good. The crash delaying at every beat.
1:57 AH YES i like this synth a lot, especially the wobbles at the very last note of each phrase. It's very funky.
2:18 I don't know if this is different from the first, but I liked this payoff a lot more. It is more energetic perhaps than the first. Shame on me if it's essentially the same composition as the first drop
2:50 Soothing.
Overall this song is quite well mixed if a little uneventful. The synth in the second build up is a lot more interesting than the first, which made the payoff make a lot more sense. It's very happy dance music, which generally with these types of song I would feel like I get a sickening feeling from how sweet it is, but thankfully this song more teeters on the less sickening side of the spectrum by providing some actually decent melodies. I would have liked to hear more hype in the song than easy listening, but for what it aims to be, it succeeds on most points.
Indeed :) You are incredibly perceptive.
Is the track yours behind the voice? If so, it's actually pretty well done. The distortion helps the track and the wubs are pretty nice. :)
I liked this, it was pretty funny, the way that you generated the voices :) It's actually pretty well mixed.
this is impeccably mastered, good mic and EQ'ing
the beat just bumps along super well. you're next on the big come up :)
you'll be noticed soon :)
Much Love ZigZag...U da homie foreal
This is absolutely heavenly. Absolutely heavenly.
^__^ Oh thank you so much. <3
0:00 Has a lot of piercing highs. It's a really nice melody though. Like the melodies and harmonies you're using. There's a kind of flanger in there which "creeps" it up. It's a pretty tune.
0:32 Ouch. That hurts a little to be honest. The highs are a bit crunchy for me, but then again I'm pretty sensitive to the timbre of the bell in general. So adjust according to your taste.
1:02 The melody is nice though. And I'm liking those chords underneath by what I'm guessing is the tgsf21x? Either way it's a nice little memorial piece that I think holds great significance to you in particular.
If anything I would EQ the bell to make it less sharp. Other than that it's beautifully composed and brings feelings. I could imagine swelling strings even coming in later on, just holding the chords underneath. It'd hold a lot of that together.
Great job, btw.
Thanks a lot for your feedback man, I'll check the EQ on the tracks and the compressor as well to lower the high frequencies, and try your idea of adding some strings or maybe a cello.
0:00 That kick is very bassy.
0:10 Not sure if I'm a huge fan of that melody line...
0:18 It sounds a bit like a horse galloping beat.
0:30 It sounds unique for sure.
0:35 OK let's see where this goes.
0:43 I do like the drum programming here but generally all the intricacies get lost under all dat bass.
0:57 That strings hovering under. It's quite passive aggressive.
1:08 Ooh. Strange. Interesting.
1:23 OK
1:28 The riff is quite repetitious though
1:35 Yeah it's getting stuck in my head though and that previous statement wasn't to say things weren't progressing because they are only ever so slowly
1:55 OK change soon pls this is getting annoying
2:01 OK that sidechained strings. Brings an interesting thing to it.
2:15 Yep you're right it's getting a bit more solemn. Hopefully it goes full solemn soon
2:27 It is pretty solemn. Still harsh and quick, but solemnity creeps in.
2:40 Yeah i like the strings by themselves sorry, the kick is too overwhelming
2:51 done
OK it was nice and interesting but perhaps your kick is too bassy. But I do like the sidechaining in the strings and other instruments. It's unique and original, but I don't really like the melody that much and it gets repetitive and even annoying just when it gets to the end. Perhaps change it up a little. Otherwise good, mostly well produced. The bass sometimes drowns all the other frequencies out. But it's inventive and new and cool anyway.
Thanks for letting me listen.
Wow...um...that was pretty obsessive of you. Thank you very much indeed! I recommend you to turn your speakers or headphones up, as this was put together on quite loud headphones. In short words: This is meant to be played loudly.
About your opinion on melodies: Well, melodies are percieved very individually.
About the repetetive nature of the song: It's techno. Go figure. I took repetition as a stylistic measure to let people hear the individual lines and voices and better let them hear the timbres. Also it becomes kind of meditative. Just think of the bassdrum as a strong heartbeat which is kind of the purpose of a 4 on the floor bass.
Now, thanks for your honest opinion of neatly ordered epic length. I appreciate it and thank you, dear ZigZag, for listening.
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