0:00 Contemplative piano intro.
0:20 Affecting reverb.
0:28 Melancholy bass note.
0:46 Feels like you're stumbling a bit over these notes.
1:00 Atmospheric.
1:27 Feels a bit off time.
1:55 I just think that it should switch up a bit more.
2:04 I like those repeated notes.
Honestly, I'm going to skip forward just to see what happens.
2:28 Wait what happened there? Strange.
skipped through several points to
7:40 OK this feels different.
8:05 It all feels very improvised.
skipping through again
9:41 That note was pretty cool.
skipping through
13:43 Ok it's ending. You're doing like a Day In The Life thing where you have one note and you make it go louder and louder at the end.
Yeah OK. My thoughts. This was a very long meandering piece and I didn't take time to listen through it all, but what I did listen to, was very much the same. There wasn't much in the way of memorable motifs, and yes I realize that this is supposed to be a mood piece that tries to establish a certain melancholy, but there was nothing that I could latch onto throughout the entire thing. It just felt like a first improvisation, which only works if you're an absolute whiz on the piano. I can tell you're good at piano, but I am too (I've been playing for 10 years) and I think there needs to be a little bit more composition wise. Even if this is based on creating ambience and atmosphere there needs to be something other than a few meanderings on the keyboard with a little reverb and effects put on.
Aside from that, it wasn't anything especially offensive to my ears, but nothing really stuck either, and I get the feeling you could do better. 3/5 from me.